qinghongh
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七律 南京
虎踞龙盘建业城，古都风雨六朝京。
秦淮河畔笙歌艳，大内宫中刀剑腥。
曲径晨幽灵谷寺，落霞夕照中山陵。
一桥飞架越天堑，乐业安居享太平。 |
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黄洋界
探花
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2008-06-30 07:54:06 Post subject: |
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尽写六朝古都形胜,欣赏.
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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司马策风
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Joined: 03 Dec 2006
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Location: 温哥华
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| Posted: 2008-06-30 18:10:25 Post subject: |
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七律 南京
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笔力雄健老到.欣赏.和你一首:
七律 乌托邦----加拿大
------司马策风
情海趣山春永驻，
红尘隔断越千年。
雪橇山顶梦飞去，
松鼠门前心爱怜。
滚滚人财投热土，
泱泱慈爱纳千川。
丹枫映酒红霞醉，
妻小举头明月圆。
小记:到温哥华的第一首
2002，10
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2008-07-01 19:28:05 Post subject: |
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| 司马策风 wrote: |
| qinghongh wrote: |
七律 南京
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笔力雄健老到.欣赏.和你一首:
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谢司马兄和诗！我乃川人，曾居南京一年半，颇对那里有些感情，故写七律.南京。谢司马兄赏读。问好！ |
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司马策风
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| Posted: 2008-07-01 22:11:45 Post subject: |
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| 司马策风 wrote: |
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七律 南京
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笔力雄健老到.欣赏.和你一首:
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谢司马兄和诗！我乃川人，曾居南京一年半，颇对那里有些感情，故写七律.南京。谢司马兄赏读。问好！ |
咳呀,没想到有遇见老乡了.为何老兄不住在温哥华呢?
你我把酒言欢,对月论诗,好不快哉.
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
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Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2008-07-01 23:55:14 Post subject: |
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| 其乐融融的古都。 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2008-07-02 15:11:30 Post subject: |
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| 司马策风 wrote: |
| qinghongh wrote: |
| 司马策风 wrote: |
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七律 南京
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笔力雄健老到.欣赏.和你一首:
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谢司马兄和诗！我乃川人，曾居南京一年半，颇对那里有些感情，故写七律.南京。谢司马兄赏读。问好！ |
咳呀,没想到有遇见老乡了.为何老兄不住在温哥华呢?
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谢司马兄盛情！有缘千里能相会。也许我们有相逢把酒论诗的那一天！ |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2008-07-02 15:15:14 Post subject: |
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谢谢黄老师赏读雅评。黄老师擅长五律，望不啬赐笔，挥洒雅兴，来首五律.重庆，写写故乡风情，如何？ |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2008-07-02 15:19:31 Post subject: |
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谢谢莹雪MM赏读。MM近来可好？MM是三燕故都才女，何不写一首“三燕故都”？ |
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