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《轮渡》枫林向晚
和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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Location: Victoria, Canada
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PostPosted: 2006-11-25 20:56:06    Post subject: 《轮渡》枫林向晚 Reply with quote

枫林是否会在某个向晚的时刻
忽然止步,在石径的边缘
即将熄灭的那把火
还盘旋在头顶,雄鹰

还在半山腰喘息。而时代的车轮
轰鸣着,驶入了另一个世纪。如果
时针能够逆转,你将一一见证
辫子、大刀、金甲和龙袍

远在长城的脚下,蜿蜒的,是那个秋
秋还没有老,他的那把大刀
盘在辫子之上空鸣,他的金甲和龙袍
掖在怀里。暴涨了一个夏季的

那池湖水,忽然空明了
欲言又止,欲止又言的,是异域
胸膛间,火一样燃烧的
那片枫林,高高举过了头顶
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赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2006-11-26 00:48:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

欲言又止,欲止又言的,是异域
胸膛间,火一样燃烧的
。。。。。内心的感悟融合诗行,状态好啊 。提。
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孙慧峰
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Joined: 09 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2006-11-26 05:26:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

意识流动感很强~
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左岸
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Joined: 12 Oct 2006
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Location: 中国大连
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PostPosted: 2006-11-26 17:48:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

那池湖水,忽然空明了
欲言又止,欲止又言的,是异域
胸膛间,火一样燃烧的
那片枫林,高高举过了头顶
描摹细腻,通感,出神入画的韵味
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2006-11-26 18:56:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

岛斑闭关数日, 武功又加了几分. 接着写
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