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天为谁春?
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PostPosted: 2008-07-01 15:56:34    Post subject: 天为谁春? Reply with quote





没有你的日子
跌倒在纳兰凄迷的诗句里
盈盈泪光,挽着他
瘦弱的灯花
端凝往事的窗
点亮我,一个又一个
伶仃天涯的


窗外,丝帛般柔软的月光
飘荡在无际的夜空
漾起空气中
袅袅升腾着的梨花香
似柔柔的水,滑过心口,划过
案前,呼唤你的小令
摇曳了心底
久久的


倏然,一阵急风挑开帘幔
眉心,就这样被几滴冷雨擦伤
关上所有的窗
任明晰的、混沌的思绪
同雨声自由的
碰撞、翻飞
空阶
滴到

当第一缕醒来的细阳
来敲小窗时,思念
正落在一瓣小令的肩上
落尽梨花


西




似此星辰非昨夜

旧时朱楼今挂雨,紫盖红花眼底桥。
似此星辰非昨夜,为谁风露立中宵。
新妆碎步移香舞,落木寒风滴泪招。
倦晚思君蝴蝶梦,初魂散枕柳眉描。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-01 15:58:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗盗同学,问好,问大家好!有时间帮我贴一下那图,音乐贴上更好。劳驾!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-02 06:06:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

你们两个继续~~ 诗一首比一首销魂 Smile
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PostPosted: 2008-07-02 09:30:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

原来在闭门读纳兰词,问好!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-02 10:26:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

清幽美丽~~
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PostPosted: 2008-07-02 15:12:06    Post subject: 周六、日完成所嘱,这两天实在很忙! Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
诗盗同学,问好,问大家好!有时间帮我贴一下那图,音乐贴上更好。劳驾!

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PostPosted: 2008-07-02 22:36:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

大作一出果然不俗 最喜欢的是【瘦弱的灯花---点亮我 一个又一个伶仃天涯夜】【落尽梨花 月 又西】既有现代又有古韵
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PostPosted: 2008-07-03 06:56:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
你们两个继续~~ 诗一首比一首销魂 Smile


谢谢悠子夸奖!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-03 06:57:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

拈花微笑 wrote:
原来在闭门读纳兰词,问好!


没电脑用的日子,就抱着纳兰词,度日。拈花兄好。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-03 06:58:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

红袖添乱 wrote:
清幽美丽~~


谢谢袖姐赞美!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-03 06:59:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

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苏茉儿 wrote:
诗盗同学,问好,问大家好!有时间帮我贴一下那图,音乐贴上更好。劳驾!


那就不劳烦了。就这样也挺好!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-03 07:00:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

曲元奇 wrote:
大作一出果然不俗 最喜欢的是【瘦弱的灯花---点亮我 一个又一个伶仃天涯夜】【落尽梨花 月 又西】既有现代又有古韵


谢谢曲兄一直的支持,以后有作品会拿来让您过目,祝愿您执笔愉快!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-04 13:03:10    Post subject: 好了!这图转了个大弯才贴上。 Reply with quote

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苏茉儿 wrote:
诗盗同学,问好,问大家好!有时间帮我贴一下那图,音乐贴上更好。劳驾!


那就不劳烦了。就这样也挺好!

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PostPosted: 2008-07-04 13:49:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢诗盗,辛苦了。沏一杯茉莉花茶给你。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-06 16:38:45    Post subject: 客气&不客气~ Reply with quote

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谢谢诗盗,辛苦了。沏一杯茉莉花茶给你。

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