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关于地震的两个

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-05-15 03:34:25 Post subject: 关于地震的两个

《面对生命之轻》我知道，即算有再大的伤囗我们的阵痛和创伤都会轻轻滑进依然的山峦 ——摘自森林伐木诗《大地的疼痛》我们还能说些什么太多的悲与痛，从那叫汶川的地方出发，流淌。浸透五月的天，五月的地掣痛每一颗心，无论远近想你，数十亿年的沧桑 2008年5月12日12日14时28分坼裂起的痛，迟早会滑进那依旧的峰峦轻轻，不留痕我们，终究只是你匆匆的过客，至今侥幸行走着面对生命的轻，又怎么将痛掩埋成最初的绿也许，词典里应该永远删除“放弃” 仅仅留下昙花的启示《亲爱的宝贝，如果你长大》亲爱的宝贝，如果你能活着，一定要记住我爱你 ——地震中,一位遇难母亲给怀中婴儿的手机短信亲爱的宝贝，如果你长大一定要记住爱你的，不仅仅是妈妈你要迎着朝阳和林中的鸟儿一起把绿荫歌唱亲爱的宝贝，如果你长大一定要记住你爱的，不仅仅是妈妈你要甩开臂膀用汗水浇灌废墟使花丛怒放

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-05-15 05:16:10 Post subject:

我知道，即算有再大的伤囗我们的阵痛和创伤都会轻轻滑进依然的山峦握手～

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-05-18 01:21:55 Post subject:

明月好！在自然面前，人类真的太渺小了。这些天，老忍不住流泪，为遇难的生灵，为顽强的生命，为诚挚的心灵。。。。珍爱生命，让生命尽可能开绽！

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Posted: 2008-05-18 01:24:14 Post subject:

面对生命的轻，又怎么将痛掩埋成最初的绿问好 _________________ 美是岁月沉淀的金

戴永良
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Posted: 2008-05-27 19:40:21 Post subject:

我们还能说些什么太多的悲与痛在，从那叫汶川的地方出发、流淌。浸透五月的五月的天，五月的地掣痛每一颗心，无论远近 _________________ 真诚友爱善良

白水
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Posted: 2008-05-27 20:23:16 Post subject:

也许，词典里应该永远删除“放弃” 问好荷梦

wq0066
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Posted: 2008-06-13 16:43:42 Post subject:

好有新意... 学习! _________________ 天边云一朵苍海粟一粒云儿朵朵随风飘粟儿粒粒满山崖

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-06-16 05:33:31 Post subject:

谢谢朋友们的评阅！问好！

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-06-23 02:44:54 Post subject:

把另一首也加进来，一起收文集吧！

秀水
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Posted: 2008-06-23 21:35:17 Post subject:

感动.问候荷梦 _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-06-25 14:21:10 Post subject:

谢谢秀水！回好！

nobody
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Posted: 2008-06-27 20:41:18 Post subject:

第一个不错，但缺少亮点。以下几句有点失败，因为被用烂了。应该从词典里永远删除。也许，词典里应该永远删除“放弃” _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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