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近来的有关栀子花的三个
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PostPosted: 2008-06-10 05:50:56    Post subject: 近来的有关栀子花的三个 Reply with quote

《栀子花的香味弥散在正午的阳光下》

不必细说等待的漫长
抖开洁白的记忆
以雪样的清纯回应阳光的热烈
遗忘的,不仅仅是寒冷与风霜

季节轮回的渴望远去
一缕幽香,向夏的心脏漫去

《昨夜的雷雨带来了清凉的早晨》

那时,街灯正昏黄的慵懒着
送走笑语的道路,泛着白
没有预约,雷电就来了

风与雨急骤,狂乱
掠走片刻的宁静,夜随后睡眠
稀释白天里攒积的热
季节打起了踉跄

鸟儿唤出朝阳的时候
有片片雪白在衣襟或发梢跳跃
早晨醉进了
栀子花味的清凉


《我们这里的端午节》

端午堇一红
端午节便来了

带着蛋糕与酒肉
老的,少的“姑娘”忙碌起来
给父母给兄弟“送节”
习俗里,附庸着的孝顺况味不一


发着请柬,数着钞票
木制的龙船划起来
船桨下,划出了
宗族将修的祠堂或道路
更划出了许多的无奈


门头辟邪的艾草菖蒲
不知道,抑或是遗忘了
有个跟端午节有关的古人
是那样地喜欢着香草

我们这里的端午节
只有栀子花年年白满树
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-06-10 06:20:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

季节轮回的渴望远去
一缕幽香,向夏的心脏漫去
........回味的一组.
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PostPosted: 2008-06-10 06:45:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

鸟儿唤出朝阳的时候
有片片雪白在衣襟或发梢跳跃
早晨醉进了
栀子花味的清凉


轻灵,舞蹈的~~
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PostPosted: 2008-06-10 08:32:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

遗忘的,不仅仅是寒冷与风霜

季节轮回的渴望远去
一缕幽香,向夏的心脏漫去
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PostPosted: 2008-06-16 05:36:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
季节轮回的渴望远去
一缕幽香,向夏的心脏漫去
........回味的一组.

谢谢评阅!
问阿依、溪语好!
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PostPosted: 2008-06-19 03:56:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

季节轮回的渴望远去
一缕幽香,向夏的心脏漫去

诗句中的这个"漫"字,用得好绝...学习了!
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PostPosted: 2008-06-19 03:58:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢wq0066 !

晚上好!
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PostPosted: 2008-06-19 05:48:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

鸟儿唤出朝阳的时候
有片片雪白在衣襟或发梢跳跃
早晨醉进了
栀子花味的清凉


先抑后扬的感觉,欣赏,问好荷梦~
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PostPosted: 2008-06-19 22:00:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢【我们这里的端午节】 因为南方的端午节与北方的端午节不同 有生活气息
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 20:29:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
鸟儿唤出朝阳的时候
...


呵呵,一些随感啦!
回明月好!
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 20:30:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

曲元奇 wrote:
喜欢【我们这里的端午节】 因为南方的端午节与北方的端午节不同 有生活气息

应该有不同的,而我这里的更多的是对一些变味了的民俗的感叹.
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PostPosted: 2008-06-22 05:28:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的一组, 提
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