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近来的有关栀子花的三个

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-06-10 05:50:56 Post subject: 近来的有关栀子花的三个

《栀子花的香味弥散在正午的阳光下》不必细说等待的漫长抖开洁白的记忆以雪样的清纯回应阳光的热烈遗忘的，不仅仅是寒冷与风霜季节轮回的渴望远去一缕幽香，向夏的心脏漫去《昨夜的雷雨带来了清凉的早晨》那时，街灯正昏黄的慵懒着送走笑语的道路,泛着白没有预约，雷电就来了风与雨急骤,狂乱掠走片刻的宁静，夜随后睡眠稀释白天里攒积的热季节打起了踉跄鸟儿唤出朝阳的时候有片片雪白在衣襟或发梢跳跃早晨醉进了栀子花味的清凉《我们这里的端午节》端午堇一红端午节便来了带着蛋糕与酒肉老的，少的“姑娘”忙碌起来给父母给兄弟“送节” 习俗里，附庸着的孝顺况味不一发着请柬，数着钞票木制的龙船划起来船桨下，划出了宗族将修的祠堂或道路更划出了许多的无奈门头辟邪的艾草菖蒲不知道，抑或是遗忘了有个跟端午节有关的古人是那样地喜欢着香草我们这里的端午节只有栀子花年年白满树

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-06-10 06:20:34 Post subject:

季节轮回的渴望远去一缕幽香，向夏的心脏漫去 ........回味的一组.

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Posted: 2008-06-10 06:45:48 Post subject:

鸟儿唤出朝阳的时候有片片雪白在衣襟或发梢跳跃早晨醉进了栀子花味的清凉轻灵，舞蹈的～～ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2008-06-10 08:32:08 Post subject:

遗忘的，不仅仅是寒冷与风霜季节轮回的渴望远去一缕幽香，向夏的心脏漫去 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-06-16 05:36:34 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

季节轮回的渴望远去
一缕幽香，向夏的心脏漫去
........回味的一组.

谢谢评阅！
问阿依、溪语好！

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Posted: 2008-06-19 03:56:12 Post subject:

季节轮回的渴望远去一缕幽香，向夏的心脏漫去诗句中的这个"漫"字,用得好绝...学习了! _________________ 天边云一朵苍海粟一粒云儿朵朵随风飘粟儿粒粒满山崖

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-06-19 03:58:19 Post subject:

谢谢wq0066 ！晚上好！

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-06-19 05:48:34 Post subject:

鸟儿唤出朝阳的时候有片片雪白在衣襟或发梢跳跃早晨醉进了栀子花味的清凉先抑后扬的感觉，欣赏，问好荷梦～

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Posted: 2008-06-19 22:00:57 Post subject:

喜欢【我们这里的端午节】因为南方的端午节与北方的端午节不同有生活气息

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-06-21 20:29:13 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

鸟儿唤出朝阳的时候
...

呵呵,一些随感啦!
回明月好!

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-06-21 20:30:12 Post subject:

曲元奇 wrote:

喜欢【我们这里的端午节】因为南方的端午节与北方的端午节不同有生活气息

应该有不同的,而我这里的更多的是对一些变味了的民俗的感叹.

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Posted: 2008-06-22 05:28:04 Post subject:

不错的一组, 提

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