郑士渊 童生
Joined: 14 Jun 2006 Posts: 49
郑士渊Collection |
Posted: 2006-11-30 03:59:37 Post subject: 《钓鱼》 |
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鱼喜欢什么
钓鱼人就用什么作饵
尖尖的钩埋藏在饵里面
鱼没发现,张嘴吞吃
鱼被抓住了
鲜血直往肚子里流
鱼无论怎么挣扎、摆脱
钩都不止步 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2006-11-30 19:06:23 Post subject: |
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写实, 是实 |
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和平岛 举人

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 1277 Location: Victoria, Canada 和平岛Collection |
Posted: 2006-12-01 18:01:05 Post subject: |
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无论怎么挣扎、摆脱
都醒不来, 都醒不来的月光
照在昨天很远的河面上
 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗 |
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蓝桥 秀才
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 105
蓝桥Collection |
Posted: 2006-12-03 07:04:00 Post subject: |
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命运的沉思! |
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维鹿延 秀才
Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 212 Location: 中国广东 维鹿延Collection |
Posted: 2006-12-03 08:46:14 Post subject: |
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贪官写照 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音 |
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郑士渊 童生
Joined: 14 Jun 2006 Posts: 49
郑士渊Collection |
Posted: 2006-12-09 23:54:20 Post subject: |
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谢各位读评! |
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