一树摇风
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Joined: 15 Nov 2006
Posts: 37
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 Posted: 2006-11-25 18:17:08 Post subject: 夜 雨 |
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雨终于落在了眼帘之外
＿＿一个披着大氅的人喃喃着：
用泪水清洗忧伤是多么的徒劳
就像那只破裂的黑陶
依旧装不下
一个没落贵族的心事
泥泞从来都是真实的
无论如何遮掩
俗世永远是扭捏的模样
那么 就让雨们远走他乡吧
戴上斗笠
沿着夜行者散乱的脚印
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和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
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| Posted: 2006-11-25 18:37:02 Post subject: |
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这种怀旧
欲去还来的心情
跃然纸上
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蓝桥
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 105
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| Posted: 2006-11-25 19:18:33 Post subject: |
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| 厚重的一个，欣赏！ |
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左岸
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Joined: 12 Oct 2006
Posts: 215
Location: 中国大连
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| Posted: 2006-12-04 04:44:20 Post subject: |
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那么 就让雨们远走他乡吧
戴上斗笠
沿着夜行者散乱的脚印
很耐读，意象冷峭
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760
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| Posted: 2006-12-08 23:18:38 Post subject: |
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耐读，细品～
问好！ |
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杯中冲浪
进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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墨染红颜
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Joined: 08 Oct 2006
Posts: 69
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| Posted: 2006-12-09 22:08:57 Post subject: |
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雨的心思悄悄蔓延。欣赏！
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维鹿延
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 212
Location: 中国广东
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| Posted: 2006-12-10 06:29:40 Post subject: |
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言雨之境，必有内情。握手。
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