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雨 夜
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 17:20:57    Post subject: 雨 夜 Reply with quote

雨 夜


雨一直在黑夜中
轻柔而又泼辣地
淘洗 世界的
浓度与温度


风没有直接问我的心情
而是从我与夜相拥的间隙中
用手触摸我心跳的律动


茶杯已经空了
在书桌上
水与茶杯的爱情 为何
在这样的雨夜
干涸


又一个让我 静听
窗外世界
在晶莹里
沉睡
睡进醒着人的
另一半空间
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 18:17:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

有些轻柔和清新
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 19:27:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
有些轻柔和清新


问好 感谢 您的提读与点评 在以后的日子中还请您多多指导哦
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