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一心二用（外一首）

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Posted: 2008-06-14 18:49:53 Post subject: 一心二用（外一首）

一心二用今天傍晚我在读诗的间隙熬了一锅绿豆粥另外还做了一份拌黄瓜或者说，今天傍晚我在熬绿豆粥和拌黄瓜的间隙读了几首诗往返书房和厨房之间要路过客厅当我在这二者之间走动的时候忽而想着熬粥，忽而又想着读诗但是，在厨房里我全心想的是诗歌在书房的电脑前又变成了粥和黄瓜我完全不知道一心是否真的可以二用—— 阴谋正午刚过，天突然黑得可怕不知道是谁在猛锤着天锣那一道道银光闪过黑天便裂开一条长长的隙缝这肯定是场阴谋要不然，为何竟有滔滔的白水往下倾泻？为何陆地竟成了恣肆的江洋？为何它来了还要带走树木、庄稼、房屋以及那些无辜的人和牲畜？（2008-6-13初稿，14日修改）

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Posted: 2008-06-14 18:57:36 Post subject:

哈, 你的诗歌特有味.顶个就是要声明一下, 白水和阴谋好象没什么关系

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Posted: 2008-06-14 19:02:43 Post subject:

完全是巧合，阴谋也许也是巧合~~~

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-06-14 20:24:09 Post subject:

阴谋正午刚过，天突然黑得可怕不知道是谁在猛锤着天锣那一道道银光闪过黑天便裂开一条长长的隙缝这肯定是场阴谋要不然，为何竟有滔滔的白水往下倾泻？为何陆地竟成了恣肆的江洋？为何它来了还要带走树木、庄稼、房屋以及那些无辜的人和牲畜？

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Posted: 2008-06-14 22:20:49 Post subject:

特有（黄瓜）味。 N年没吃过凉拌黄瓜了。。。来欣赏一下。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-06-16 12:40:11 Post subject:

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我完全不知道一心是否真的可以二用——

何止二用？这里的学生边上电脑，边打电话，边听音乐，边吃零食，还边做作业；三用、四用、五用...... 真服了他们了。
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Posted: 2008-06-16 12:54:13 Post subject:

Lake wrote:

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我完全不知道一心是否真的可以二用——

何止二用？这里的学生边上电脑，边打电话，边听音乐，边吃零食，还边做作业；三用、四用、五用...... 真服了他们了。

哈, 湖,THAT'S ME 而且特能吃零食,,,,,,,吃的胖胖的象熊猫一样 Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-06-17 11:22:04 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

哈, 湖,THAT'S ME 而且特能吃零食,,,,,,,吃的胖胖的象熊猫一样 Very Happy

哈,国宝!
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Posted: 2008-06-17 12:44:50 Post subject:

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Posted: 2008-06-17 15:24:30 Post subject:

唐伯虎 wrote:

这位美女是谁?

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Posted: 2008-06-17 15:25:23 Post subject:

Lake wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

哈, 湖,THAT'S ME 而且特能吃零食,,,,,,,吃的胖胖的象熊猫一样 Very Happy

哈,国宝!

国宝好啊，那赶紧吃吧~~~ Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-06-17 17:55:37 Post subject:

kino wrote:

唐伯虎 wrote:

这位美女是谁?

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Posted: 2008-06-18 05:31:25 Post subject:

有个性的话语方式.颀赏 _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

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