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大山的皱纹

和平岛
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Posted: 2006-11-24 21:58:16 Post subject: 大山的皱纹

《大山的皱纹》文/和平岛千层梯子陈述着走向天堂的路古往今来那条被叫做路的终究有尽头登高临风的汗水有尽头百年的苦难也有尽头惟有天，才是天外有天在那回眸的瞬间天堂就破碎成一千片梦的水镜山下还有更低的山云的脚印里蕴藏着被老黄牛耕耘过千遍的哲学无须口水和笔墨了吧你看，那一夜的风霜雕刻在大山额头的是皱纹皱纹里的大山几乎够着了天堂 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

半溪明月
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Posted: 2006-11-24 22:43:03 Post subject: 这个地方真美,可以在上面走路吧?:)

欣赏学习老师的作品,问好!

白水
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Posted: 2006-11-25 07:42:59 Post subject:

那一夜的风霜雕刻在大山额头的是皱纹韧

赵福治
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Posted: 2006-11-26 00:56:48 Post subject:

皱纹里的大山几乎够着了天堂。。。。。。。。。。。。有图画美。

杨光
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Posted: 2007-08-24 00:10:37 Post subject:

无须口水和笔墨了吧你看，那一夜的风霜雕刻在大山额头的是皱纹皱纹里的大山几乎够着了天堂诗意,耐人寻味的结尾 _________________ 杨光的语言空间 http://blog.sina.com.cn/languagespace

下一个偶像是野兽
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Posted: 2007-08-24 10:13:16 Post subject:

呵呵，拜读 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-08-24 13:24:24 Post subject:

宽厚大气之美，体现旷达致远，读来心胸舒臆！问候和平岛兄！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

冷巉
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Posted: 2007-08-28 05:13:57 Post subject:

如果把大山连着和平岛，却很有一番意境，诗意中的世界，完整着一个伟大的现实。问好！ _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-08-28 07:10:35 Post subject:

无须口水和笔墨了吧你看，那一夜的风霜雕刻在大山额头的是皱纹。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。最喜欢这节，问好兄。

黑发瀑布
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Posted: 2007-08-28 08:20:09 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

那一夜的风霜
雕刻在大山额头的
是皱纹

韧

赞同白水。
_________________
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博弈
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Posted: 2007-08-28 20:31:29 Post subject:

在那回眸的瞬间天堂就破碎成一千片梦的水镜同有感悟! _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

金金
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Posted: 2007-08-28 22:45:02 Post subject:

又见岛兄的诗歌 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

nobody
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Posted: 2007-08-28 23:04:11 Post subject:

“大“系列的。欢迎新朋友。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

舒中
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Posted: 2007-08-29 01:41:44 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

皱纹里的大山
几乎够着了天堂
。。。。。。。。。。。。有图画美。

也是喜欢

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-08-29 07:32:02 Post subject:

惟有天，才是天外有天在那回眸的瞬间天堂就破碎成一千片梦的水镜山下还有更低的山云的脚印里蕴藏着被老黄牛耕耘过千遍的哲学这两段极其精彩，很富哲理的诗歌，再学习！

金金
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Posted: 2007-08-29 20:52:13 Post subject:

再读再提 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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