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白水
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Posted: 2008-06-14 09:48:25 Post subject: 夫子, 答我(外二首)

夫子, 答我悬一勾新月垂钓散淡的月光端午的月光哦系不住断线的心事一粒粒晶莹透亮的从我的指缝滑落棕叶是裹不住了我从故园的废墟割回一把艾草熏香, 合眸汨罗江湍急的流水已止于我颤动的睫毛. 夫子今晚我不问天我只问你北川, 与你共渡龙舟的可有诗人? (于2008, 端阳节) 饮难以启齿的不再是你唇边一滴水的滞留接过这杯浓黑的咖啡我们无言相视谁替我饮？空杯为谁？杯空空, 无色无味… … (于JUNE09/2008) 映月阿炳瞎了, 瞎子阿炳根本不需要眼睛坐地日行日行就是八万里. 丝竹空空空空的任凭长空翻滚的日月世间如果有一扇门关闭一定会有另一扇门为之开启（APR 25/2008）

嘉慕思
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Posted: 2008-06-14 13:50:05 Post subject:

世间如果有一扇门关闭一定会有另一扇门为之开启学习---- _________________ 我为自己唱挽歌---文学是个人的选择,不是集体的强加

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-06-14 14:25:33 Post subject:

世间如果有一扇门关闭一定会有另一扇门为之开启一粒粒晶莹透亮的从我的指缝滑落棕叶是裹不住了欣赏佳句。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-14 16:11:33 Post subject:

嘉慕思 wrote:

世间如果有一扇门关闭
一定会有另一扇门为之开启

学习----

问好嘉慕思, 很久没见你了. 很高兴你们回来.

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-14 16:12:32 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

世间如果有一扇门关闭
...

谢谢冲浪. 周末愉快.

游向高原的鱼
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Posted: 2008-06-14 16:56:51 Post subject:

白水，我读了想到一个成语：静水流深。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-06-14 17:42:44 Post subject:

白水这几首都很不错，借喻和隐喻用的很微妙～赞一个！

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-06-14 17:46:16 Post subject:

白水，诗歌我选了一些，但是后面的诗歌每次都要翻很长时间，才能到需要的地方，如果中途网页打不开，又要从头开始，有没有一下子就可以翻到需要的页数的～我们单位因为设备大搬迁，天天都在加班，到晚上１０点才能回来，今天是逃了一天，因为孩子要开学，有朋友将孩子从外地送过来，所以在家休息～

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-14 17:53:23 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

白水，我读了想到一个成语：静水流深。

谢谢鱼, 猜想你读懂了我的诗歌.

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-14 17:54:58 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

白水这几首都很不错，借喻和隐喻用的很微妙～赞一个！

哈, 我把月亮钓回来了. Very Happy

其实不微妙, 我的诗歌总是比较直白, 不带拐弯的.

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-14 18:03:12 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

白水，诗歌我选了一些，但是后面的诗歌每次都要翻很长时间，才能到需要的地方，如果中途网页打不开，又要从头开始，有没有一下子就可以翻到需要的页数的～
...

谢谢你, 抽空再细选. 我最近也累傻了, 今天得点空赶紧跑来玩玩, 看见你们真高兴 Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-06-14 19:05:50 Post subject:

饮难以启齿的不再是你唇边一滴水的滞留接过这杯浓黑的咖啡我们无言相视谁替我饮？空杯为谁？杯空空, 无色无味… … 有点玄，不过挺喜欢~~

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-20 19:22:49 Post subject:

问好KINO. 玄吗? 空了好, 无色无味… …

莞君
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Posted: 2008-06-21 05:10:25 Post subject:

欣赏有很多诗句很耐品赞远握祝好姐 _________________ 莞君

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-22 06:23:56 Post subject:

问好DD

秀水
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Posted: 2008-06-24 13:39:28 Post subject:

耐品.颀赏.问候白水 _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-06-25 00:57:46 Post subject:

第一首构思奇巧，把屈原和北川审美地结合起来，历史和现实拥抱出朦胧的意境。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2008-06-25 14:12:23 Post subject:

最喜读<夫子,答我>

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-27 15:17:19 Post subject:

秀水 wrote:

耐品.颀赏.问候白水

问好秀水, 多交流

白水
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Posted: 2008-06-27 15:19:33 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

第一首构思奇巧，把屈原和北川审美地结合起来，历史和现实拥抱出朦胧的意境。

端午, 难免想到了纹川的诗人们......

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