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暗伤(外一首)

吟啸徐行
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Joined: 03 May 2008
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Posted: 2008-06-15 23:08:08 Post subject: 暗伤(外一首)

暗伤我看过许多经典无一例外遭受过冷遇那么一个人的暗伤是否也有类似的本质收藏并敝帚自珍秋天来时你要用它打扫自己的心灵风风过之后一切停下来站在原地陷入不能自拔的孤独突然鹰的翅膀打翻高高在上的乌云投下一串欢叫寂静解冻了表情在脸的河流上流淌月光在夜的闸门汹涌心起风了思想随风起舞 _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

司马策风
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Joined: 03 Dec 2006
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Posted: 2008-06-15 23:47:41 Post subject:

<暗伤>富有理趣美. <风>将自然之风和内心情绪互动表现得优美动人.结尾稍显直白,似乎还可更加含蓄蕴籍. 两首都令人喜欢! _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

刘坤军
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Joined: 16 Jun 2008
Posts: 9

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Posted: 2008-06-16 00:39:08 Post subject:

秋天来时你要用它打扫自己的心灵喜欢这种表达！ _________________ 刘坤军：http://blog.sina.com.cn/liukunjun

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