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弦上

张瑞
童生

Joined: 27 Oct 2006
Posts: 5

张瑞Collection

Posted: 2006-11-20 06:35:02 Post subject: 弦上

寒霜落下琴声在一块岩石上突兀着夜的色泽，深浅不平乡村在鸟儿合闭的翅膀里沉睡梦，在江心的月里漂浮一条鱼爬上夜的河堤高挂的琴弦上那里，桂花树和伐木声正穿过谁的指尖拨亮我窗台的灯火

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
赵福治Collection

Posted: 2006-11-20 06:38:46 Post subject:

高挂的琴弦上那里，桂花树和伐木声正穿过谁的指尖拨亮我窗台的灯火。。。。投入，喜欢。

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection

Posted: 2006-11-20 06:49:12 Post subject:

意象朴素清新，有意境感。欣赏。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2006-11-20 07:27:19 Post subject:

是不错, 清新自然

鹤雨
秀才

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 113
Location: 上海
鹤雨Collection

Posted: 2006-11-20 18:17:56 Post subject:

张瑞这首比较灵妙！祝贺！ _________________ 愿意和大家共同进步!

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