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我的学生周郑芳的诗歌《无题——记汶川大地震》

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Posted: 2008-06-10 16:17:10 Post subject: 我的学生周郑芳的诗歌《无题——记汶川大地震》

无题 ——记汶川大地震 ◆ 高二(12)班周郑芳当废墟冲斥了所有的眼睛当烟尘遮住了所有的方向一个声音在回荡，在悠远的天空荡起悲歌那高楼已不在耸立那鸟儿也不再歌唱那汶水向着杜鹃花开的地方流淌那杜鹃含血，正在怒放

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Posted: 2008-06-10 21:10:11 Post subject:

有点空，这也算通病。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-06-10 22:33:27 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

有点空，这也算通病。

谢谢评点！
这类的短诗的确不好写。
这一首写出了作者的感觉，寄予了作者的愿望。
“那汶水向着杜鹃花开的地方
流淌
那杜鹃含血，正在怒放”
结尾还是很有意味的。

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