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<北极星>(修改版)
迪拜
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PostPosted: 2006-11-19 17:07:29    Post subject: <北极星>(修改版) Reply with quote

北极星
注定是要灿烂的

即使
只能在漆黑的地方

虽然,它终将幻灭
离别,在长夜的尽头

然而,它耀出了火花
是太阳初升的光芒
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和平岛
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PostPosted: 2006-11-19 20:27:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

从注定是要灿烂的

它耀出了火花

很好的过程
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维鹿延
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PostPosted: 2006-11-20 01:29:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗,放一放,改一改,认真和执着凝聚心血。
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蓝桥
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PostPosted: 2006-11-20 04:20:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言表达还没有找到方向,继续努力,多读多学习多练习会好起来的!
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