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《织物》（修改版）

迪拜
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Posted: 2006-11-18 22:37:30 Post subject: 《织物》（修改版）

一个男人穿着织物制成的内裤把两腿间的凸起包裹住那形态也许更能吸引另一个男人的目光而在夜里织物的棉被盖住了他的裸身你却可以想象你在他身边可以的欢乐盖了棉被我觉得我有了自己的世界我想抚摸织物抚摸他穿着的内裤他的裸身

和平岛
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Posted: 2006-11-18 23:05:07 Post subject:

可以构成一个想象的空间如果把这个空间放大, 加一点悬念的味道, 会更美 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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