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比一张纸更单薄

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Posted: 2008-06-09 03:24:20 Post subject: 比一张纸更单薄

比一张纸更浅薄舒中比一张纸更浅薄这让我满怀羞愧坐立不安一张纸愿意含情脉脉仿佛春风拥抱一棵树命中约定了难分难舍一张纸可以愁肠百结落满了午夜的脚印这些让人心疼的花朵一张纸最好沉默任凭密密麻麻的文字无知的虫子一样摧残史册但是。比一张纸更浅薄展开一张纸总是追悔莫及多么锋利呵从一张纸倒下去等候死灰复燃心里的种子舒中种子埋到我心上膨胀。并且发芽充实和焦灼让我坐立不安爱情来临。算不算晚双眸闪耀星子的微寒拥抱着。拥抱着和你的心盘根错节长吧。长吧青春比岁月更悠远心里的种子呵每一滴甘霖都是我的血润泽成最红的一朵挺拔在黑夜仰望着。仰望着爱恋和崇敬随你腰肢婀娜明天的新娘迎风招展

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Posted: 2008-06-09 13:29:07 Post subject:

"从一张纸倒下去等候死灰复燃" 想象独特的好句子.遗憾是前后的语言处理气运不协调.加油! _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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