无意无言 童生
Joined: 29 May 2008 Posts: 20
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Posted: 2008-05-29 10:30:46 Post subject: 追寻 |
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追寻 2008-05-22 20:58:49
By 无意无言
我追寻着
在戈壁荒原中
追寻远古父老的足迹
追寻空中那朵红云
盔甲在辽阔中沉睡
战车滚出碎石的泪痕
凄凄枯草
摇曳着刀光剑影
野炊灶火
闪亮着不屈的英魂
捧起星点白骨
把失落安放
裹住残破的旗帜
挥鞭
为不朽送行
我追寻着
追寻经久的呐喊
追寻遥远的雷鸣
万马奔腾犹在耳畔
烈烈鲜血把天际映红
我远远追着硝烟
遥望
逝去的苍鹰
干涸的川流
安息着战马的骸骨
荒凉的土地
盘立着红柳顽强的根
我倒在柳丛下
咀嚼叶子的苦涩
听夜色
飘摇远古笛声
05/22/08 写 _________________ 饮酒亦品茶
食笋嚼菜根 |
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始君 童生
Joined: 23 Feb 2008 Posts: 30
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Posted: 2008-05-29 20:53:03 Post subject: |
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哈哈!原来无言兄也在这里褡了个窝。
好啊,这边清静,够私密的。 |
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曲元奇 秀才
Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 427 Location: 山东 曲元奇Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-29 22:38:27 Post subject: |
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有气势 喜欢读 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-30 00:55:23 Post subject: |
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欢迎!问好! _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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无意无言 童生
Joined: 29 May 2008 Posts: 20
无意无言Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-30 09:41:24 Post subject: |
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始君 wrote: |
哈哈!原来无言兄也在这里褡了个窝。
好啊,这边清静,够私密的。 |
看你们都在这,就追过来了,哈哈~~ |
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无意无言 童生
Joined: 29 May 2008 Posts: 20
无意无言Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-30 09:44:48 Post subject: |
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谢元奇!问好! |
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无意无言 童生
Joined: 29 May 2008 Posts: 20
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Posted: 2008-05-30 09:47:42 Post subject: |
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谢谢!诗盗好! |
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曲元奇 秀才
Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 427 Location: 山东 曲元奇Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-30 20:22:34 Post subject: |
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问好 |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
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Posted: 2008-06-01 12:39:24 Post subject: |
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哈哈~~~~
无烟~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-06-02 09:25:40 Post subject: |
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某些时候,大多在夜里,夜深人静的独处,渴望与古人对话。希望有一台时光机器回到过去,不是为了成就科技,而是真的希望与心仪的古人聊聊。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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红袖添乱 秀才

Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-06-02 13:47:57 Post subject: |
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詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
某些时候,大多在夜里,夜深人静的独处,渴望与古人对话。希望有一台时光机器回到过去,不是为了成就科技,而是真的希望与心仪的古人聊聊。 |
一日,我扮古人前来,诗盗说,回去,你不是我心仪的古人! _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-06-02 14:09:25 Post subject: |
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欢迎无烟杀将过来~~ |
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始君 童生
Joined: 23 Feb 2008 Posts: 30
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Posted: 2008-06-02 17:54:35 Post subject: |
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盗兄,悠子说话很古,她该是你心仪的古人了吧。哈哈~,别错过了哦。 |
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无意无言 童生
Joined: 29 May 2008 Posts: 20
无意无言Collection |
Posted: 2008-06-04 05:34:41 Post subject: |
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红袖~~~~
哈哈~~~~ |
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无意无言 童生
Joined: 29 May 2008 Posts: 20
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Posted: 2008-06-04 05:45:37 Post subject: |
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詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
某些时候,大多在夜里,夜深人静的独处,渴望与古人对话。希望有一台时光机器回到过去,不是为了成就科技,而是真的希望与心仪的古人聊聊。 |
有时觉得离他们很近,除个别字句不懂,用语还是一样的。我漫步在荒山野岭,看茅屋升起的炊烟。 |
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无意无言 童生
Joined: 29 May 2008 Posts: 20
无意无言Collection |
Posted: 2008-06-04 05:50:26 Post subject: |
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红袖添乱 wrote: |
詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
某些时候,大多在夜里,夜深人静的独处,渴望与古人对话。希望有一台时光机器回到过去,不是为了成就科技,而是真的希望与心仪的古人聊聊。 |
一日,我扮古人前来,诗盗说,回去,你不是我心仪的古人! |
你扮得是谁呀?让我们也瞅瞅:) |
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无意无言 童生
Joined: 29 May 2008 Posts: 20
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Posted: 2008-06-04 05:56:57 Post subject: |
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悠子好!很高兴又见到你。 |
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拈花微笑 秀才
Joined: 21 Jan 2008 Posts: 311
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Posted: 2008-06-04 06:17:29 Post subject: |
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颇有历史沧桑感。欣赏! _________________ 瞠目结舌 |
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无意无言 童生
Joined: 29 May 2008 Posts: 20
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Posted: 2008-06-04 07:15:58 Post subject: |
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哈哈~~~~
谢谢~~~~ |
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