白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-31 14:33:56 Post subject: 推荐加拿大诗人川沙的诗歌<墙那边是海水> |
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[№46]墙那边是海水
墙那边是海水
蓝色的
浅蓝、深蓝、蔚蓝、蓝、蓝、蓝……
蓝到天边
一望无涯的蓝
墙那边是海水
海水上面是天空
天空上面是阳光
阳光上面是太阳
墙那边是海水
那是
那是在墙那边
墙那边是海水
你
你怎么?
你怎么到今天才看见 ?
墙那边是海水
你听
你听
你听她哗哗啦啦发着喧响
[№46] Beyond the Wall, the Sea
Beyond the wall is the sea
The blue sea
Blue light and dark,
Blue all the way to the sky,
Endlessly blue.
Beyond the wall is the sea,
Above is the sky,
Still above is sunshine,
Above sunshine, the sun.
Beyond the wall is the sea,
The sea is
Beyond the wall.
Beyond the wall is the sea,
How could you
How could you not
See it until this minute?
Beyond the wall is the sea,
Listen,
Now listen,
The waves crashing on the beach. |
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杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-05-31 19:07:35 Post subject: |
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川沙何许人也?我感觉她的诗歌很有自己的风格。
狼哥认定她是个女的?
是,要认真体会 |
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2008-05-31 22:02:26 Post subject: |
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她是尊称  _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-06-01 05:14:58 Post subject: |
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他不是她
那日烛光哀思会, 我们都朗诵了自己的诗歌. 先生有话了, "难怪人家称川沙为诗人, 而不称你们(他总这样鼓励我 ), 你的诗歌重情感, 而川沙的诗歌有哲思" 小不服, 答曰:"先生们原本就应该比LADYS有哲思."
细细想来, 先生的话有道理.
比如此诗, 从诗歌之始, 一步步展开直到:
墙那边是海水
你
你怎么?
你怎么到今天才看见 ?
客观存在的, 已存在千年. 视而不见, 充耳不闻?
这首诗歌好在用通俗易懂又不失唯美,清淡的文字, 道出了一个让人回味的理念.
个见吧, 诗歌就这样, 千人读, 千人品. |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2008-06-01 05:32:30 Post subject: |
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| 有特点的作品. |
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