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阿灿
齐遂林
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PostPosted: 2006-11-15 18:37:46    Post subject: 阿灿 Reply with quote

像女娲玩着玩着捏出了我们
贾平凹一不留神
从烟圈里吐出了阿灿
她落脚的地方是一条陋巷
男人的老实拴不住她的婚姻
和庄之蝶出墙她想做一枝红杏
占点春光也就知足了
她有个妹妹叫阿兰
阿兰被街道主任玩疯了
阿灿咬下了那个主任的一截舌头
天下的女人都在骂她
2006年11月16日
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和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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Location: Victoria, Canada
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PostPosted: 2006-11-15 19:26:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言很生动

贾平凹一不留神
从烟圈里吐出了阿灿
她落脚的地方是一条陋巷
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2006-11-15 20:49:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy 有故事。
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齐遂林
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PostPosted: 2006-11-17 21:36:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

现代诗歌有一个读者就不算失败,谢了!
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