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《汶川,你好!》
巴子
童生


Joined: 22 May 2008
Posts: 4

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PostPosted: 2008-05-25 15:23:38    Post subject: 《汶川,你好!》 Reply with quote

我不该写诗
不该写七盘沟
不该从山脚写到山顶
如果画下来
那白龙池的碧水
雪花坪的瀑布
一定不会是我今生的泪水

我不该坐在迥澜塔下
不该坐得那么安静
望着岷江和寿溪河的水波
我不该说爱
更不该把她们装入中国瓷瓶
如今瓷瓶碎了……

我不该去想卧龙
不该把它当作自己的家园
那里的阳光毛茸茸的
温顺而又安逸
那里的窗子每一扇都开着
风一吹,你就幸福地睡着了
可如今,你再也没有醒来

我只有坐在窗前
只有冷冷地望着西边
没有去擦那沾满灰尘的窗玻璃
没有去寻找一盏灯
甚至,没有心跳
希望这黑暗能抹去一切不幸
也包括幸福着的
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司马策风
举人


Joined: 03 Dec 2006
Posts: 1211
Location: 温哥华
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PostPosted: 2008-05-25 15:31:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

有点痛定思痛的余味.

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沙漠
秀才


Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
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PostPosted: 2008-05-25 18:48:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

几个"不该",角度很好!
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