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五月天栀子花盛开

gardenia
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Posted: 2008-05-24 16:12:39 Post subject: 五月天栀子花盛开

五月天栀子花盛开 Gardenia 五月天栀子花盛开很优雅很洁白很芬芳那是我的最爱诱发青春的追忆和对故人的留恋但是今年五月天何其悲哀栀子花也泪滴涟涟为中华大地和他不幸的儿女童孩因灾难的毁灭摧残愤懑叹惋伤口的血还在流淌如同凄凄的溪流哭喊数以万计的亡灵没有归天他们还没有享受人间温暖少年的理想还没实现学业未完父亲的头发已斑白答应带奶奶去山外玩瞬间一切就遥遥不可待全中国为你们恸泣世界不再有颜色记住五月天栀子花盛开为你们祈祷那洁白那幽香送你们去另一个世界记住每天每天我都会摘一朵别胸前直到花儿开尽衰败直到你们走远直到遗恨消散

nobody
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Posted: 2008-05-30 18:59:38 Post subject:

跟其他的类似，诗上尚有锤炼提高余地，但感情很真挚。让人觉得可爱可敬。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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