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丽江行之守望(配图诗)
半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2006-11-08 02:58:16    Post subject: 丽江行之守望(配图诗) Reply with quote

守望(配图诗)


提记:拉诗海,一个有着诗一样美丽名字和诗一样韵味景致的沼泽湿地公园。

一叶扁舟犁开如镜的水面
水草在镜中油油地招手
小鳟鱼在草坪间悠闲摆尾
一群候鸟晒着慵懒的太阳
嬉戏在水天相接的地方
竹篙撑起头顶一方透明的蓝
我们要向一株河柳前行

一株河柳
一株孤独的河柳
孤独地插入平静的河水心脏
吮吸着河水的疼日夜守望
它的枝桠成就它的根
脉管里奔涌着鱼的泪水

水草在河底织成了毯
你的躯体干枯成化石
枝桠已无力承载咸咸的泪
白云也悄悄躲在大山背后
你在等待变脸的急雨

群鸟在夕辉下扑翅掠霞
远影中,我惊喜发现
几根嫩枝红于灰白的枝桠间
守望成了你一生的风景

守住这片纯净的水
守住这片纯蓝的天

2006-11-8
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和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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Location: Victoria, Canada
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PostPosted: 2006-11-08 07:23:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

一株孤独的河柳
视觉上很震撼

在这如诗如画的湖里
守望成了你一生的风景

和谐之中的不和谐
优美中让你有了人生的叹息
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迪拜
同进士出身


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PostPosted: 2006-11-08 16:51:49    Post subject: 意境很好 Reply with quote

意境很好

属于传统诗
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2006-11-09 09:01:52    Post subject: 拉诗海应该是拉市海,我找不到修改的地方了~ Reply with quote

不好意思~问好大家~
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维鹿延
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PostPosted: 2006-11-12 08:14:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

我以为是我小时候的河。山似闲庭水如蓝,清幽透凉入心远。
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