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《窗外的烟囱》
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PostPosted: 2008-05-18 01:22:23    Post subject: 《窗外的烟囱》 Reply with quote

《窗外的烟囱》

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浓浓灰色下
眯起双眼
我望不到西边的山
目光回拢处,左边
那柱烟囱睁眼张望

想它一定被施了魔咒
为何对望时,双眼
竟被扯得生痛
搓搓双手,轻压
取一丝温暖抚平颤动

再望,烟囱
已闭上双眼

2.
睡过头的天浓灰
正如悬浮半空的人

流泪的白烟
在烟囱外飘扬......
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PostPosted: 2008-05-18 04:09:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

想它一定被施了魔咒
为何对望时,双眼
竟被扯得生痛
搓搓双手,轻压
取一丝温暖抚平颤动

提读 问候
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