kokho
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 发表于: 2006-12-04 14:53:59 发表主题: A cosmic dust |
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A cosmic dust
. an ode to blue-ice
A cosmic dust who has no gravity to bust
May congregate with those alike ...
. Where a star originates, and a comet gains its thrust!
When the solar wind gushes,
Roaming the curvature of space ...
. she forms the haloes of nebula, the night's lashes
Staring at her, bewildered you must
How she carries fear, omen and anticipation ...
. broom-like with ice, promises of life she casts!
Though humble in size, or noble beyond touch
She responses to unparallel aesthetical vibes ...
. within the web of muse, a princess as such!
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白水
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| 发表于: 2006-12-04 14:58:00 发表主题: |
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| HI, KOKHO. THANKS FOR YOUR POEM, I LIKE IT SO MUCH. |
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kokho
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给你这个 骄傲的小宇宙尘 ：））
。。
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和平岛
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A cosmic dust who has no gravity to bust
i like this sentence
把慧星写绝了
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kokho
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A cosmic dust who has no gravity to bust
i like this sentence
把慧星写绝了
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我可没说 月光是 慧星 哟 ;D
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