墨染红颜
童生
Joined: 08 Oct 2006
Posts: 69
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 Posted: 2006-11-08 16:54:37 Post subject: 相思（自度曲） |
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闲语坐看秋风
静凝无声
诗娇花萎歌谣冷
思无悔
伴孤灯
新雨又欺魂梦
凄凄泪哽
今生来世难相逢
空愁眉
心情赠
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和平岛
举人
Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
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| Posted: 2006-11-08 16:56:24 Post subject: |
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词人来了
景仰一凡
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2006-11-08 20:48:52 Post subject: |
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喜欢. 草和:
秋来霜白风冷
南雁孤鸣
满目黄叶倦诗情
数点墨
掩心声
半卷残词断字
轻拭泪痕
醉里寒夜梦相逢
空对月
醒三更 |
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墨染红颜
童生
Joined: 08 Oct 2006
Posts: 69
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| Posted: 2006-11-08 23:25:08 Post subject: |
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呵呵，谢谢月光，秋安：）
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维鹿延
秀才
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 212
Location: 中国广东
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| Posted: 2006-11-12 08:19:03 Post subject: |
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对词我可不敢点评啊，见谅见谅。
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