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用沙子的眼睛

维鹿延
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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Location: 中国广东
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Posted: 2006-11-07 07:20:45 Post subject: 用沙子的眼睛

用沙子的眼睛用沙子的眼睛看一眼港口路长板车用轰然的声响传达城市血液的流动沙子的眼睛一枚从树叶和尘埃中落下的铜看见整条街道一个四季每一棵树上升到流动像沙子一样说一句话张开它的嘴巴说哦累啊累啊累啊累我们其实就是一颗螺丝钉如果信仰和精神丢失哦累啊累啊累啊累我们其实就什么都不是可以站起来的眼睛可以远望东平河巨大的虹桥掩映巨大的莲花让我们像被突然撞击一样失去视角那是城市一景　并不一定是心灵可以放大的嘴巴说那是城市一景　并不一定是心灵其实庞大的港口路是因为我们是分子而庞大我们如果有心灵站在我们前面的机器就只是铁我们说站在我们前面的机器其实就只是铁啊铁 20060925 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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Location: Victoria, Canada
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Posted: 2006-11-11 22:02:00 Post subject:

沙子的眼睛很形象化地描写了海滨城市的生活和思考的深度 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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