弹剑作歌 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 68
弹剑作歌Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-02 23:55:22 Post subject: 劫后 |
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何惧张狂霸道声,
老庄作伴自然行。
风云不向平林涌,
山水常因智者生。
瘴毒摧花尤烂漫,
春寒浸石更峥嵘。
程中莫问归来事,
一路逍遥便是晴。 |
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松云老人 秀才
Joined: 11 Apr 2008 Posts: 376 Location: 中国 松云老人Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-03 00:24:08 Post subject: |
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欣赏佳作。颈联尤妙! |
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郑达夫 秀才

Joined: 29 Oct 2007 Posts: 734 Location: 福建永春仙夾園德樓 362604 郑达夫Collection |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-03 05:10:51 Post subject: |
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仗义执言,弹剑作歌,巧用谐音,文智多多。欣赏! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-05-04 18:56:29 Post subject: |
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喜读之。顺兴。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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弹剑作歌 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 68
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Posted: 2008-05-04 22:15:29 Post subject: |
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多谢松云老人点评! |
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弹剑作歌 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 68
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Posted: 2008-05-04 22:17:27 Post subject: |
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多谢光临! |
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弹剑作歌 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 68
弹剑作歌Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-04 22:19:09 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
仗义执言,弹剑作歌,巧用谐音,文智多多。欣赏! |
黄洋兄缪赞,问好! |
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弹剑作歌 童生
Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 68
弹剑作歌Collection |
Posted: 2008-05-04 22:21:58 Post subject: |
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顺兴则喜,问好! |
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