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悠子
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Posted: 2008-04-29 12:46:59 Post subject: 梦回

掀起一帘嫩绿的柳浪黄鹂鸟叽喳着，扑楞着欢娱春的颜色就这样在湖面荡开染过山外的青山苏堤春晓垂柳、桃花、拱形的石桥不需要任何诗词的点缀永远邂逅一幅浅妆淡抹的妖娆还有那南宋的歌舫游离在心亭谁在吹一曲湖光山色的小调恍若一袭衣袖飘然了天涯海角梦的心魂就是这样踯躅在江南一片烟雨，一爿荷塘而那一滴相思泪滚动在微卷的荷叶晶莹而清令不能将甘甜滴入涩苦的莲心 04/29/2008呓语

啥么
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啥么Collection

Posted: 2008-04-29 12:52:24 Post subject:

鹂？ _________________ 这有点麻烦

悠子
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Posts: 1383
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Posted: 2008-04-29 12:55:54 Post subject:

谢谢谢谢。我这里没这个字呀

悠子
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Posts: 1383
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悠子Collection

Posted: 2008-04-29 12:57:22 Post subject:

光顾谢了，向石头请安~ 最近被关起来了？

啥么
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啥么Collection

Posted: 2008-04-29 13:03:12 Post subject:

可以copy and paste 关起来好做事 _________________ 这有点麻烦

拈花微笑
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Posted: 2008-04-29 17:10:38 Post subject:

要是有酒就更妙... _________________ 瞠目结舌

苏茉儿
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Posted: 2008-04-29 17:47:16 Post subject:

情托于景，悠子是不是身体不适想家了。抱抱也许会有些许的温暖！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

飞狐
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Joined: 26 Mar 2008
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Posted: 2008-04-30 06:52:34 Post subject:

请悠子多注意身体哦!早日康复!

詩盜喜裸評
进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007
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Posted: 2008-04-30 08:42:19 Post subject:

泛黄的画轴，想像一片一片建立起来画轴前有一枝笔拿着笔的身影似剪裁过一般光线强烈到刺眼不由得眯起眼睛细看阳光从窗框大喇喇进来必须做一些抵抗奋力向窗外看去向宇宙的折叠处延伸见到一双，敲着键盘的手 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

曲元奇
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Posted: 2008-04-30 19:21:40 Post subject:

‘’谁在吹一曲湖光山色小调恍若一袭衣袖飘然了天涯海角‘’ 湖光山色俗用吹一曲小调来包装又下句 ‘’恍若--------‘’让习惯的用法改为出奇了

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Posted: 2008-05-01 16:24:19 Post subject:

那环绕的烟雨裹着梦的回忆萦怀了一颗在风雨里翻动的心 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

呆哥的女人
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Posted: 2008-05-06 02:35:35 Post subject: 好久没来,回一个

熨平满天期待的柔情白鹭儿冉冉地，优雅地飞行风的秘密就这样在翼尖穿越锁住楼外的诗楼雷峰夕照初遇、倾心、缠绵的断桥到处是动情妙曼的演绎仍然难逃那份漫不过金山的寂寥还有那长生的灵芝坠落在途中我在想那番离经叛道的挣扎是否长夜难捱落入了古卷青灯梦的眼睛就是这样凝视着江南一个传说，一舟春雨而那一把油纸伞盛开在泛碧的湖心甜蜜而灵异不能将幸福瞒过昏聩的人间 _________________ 人称呆嫂

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2008-05-06 08:19:48 Post subject:

我是呆瓜~~~ 好诗~~！ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

悠子
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Posted: 2008-05-06 10:03:53 Post subject:

谢谢各位好友。生病啦，写字的力气都没有。你们的回贴给我温馨和力量~~

悠子
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Posted: 2008-05-06 10:06:31 Post subject:

呆哥的女人 wrote:

熨平满天期待的柔情
...

很喜欢。好久没见，问个好，还有你家呆哥~。

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-05-06 17:45:11 Post subject: 呆嫂、呆嫂，呆哥的宝～

呆哥的女人 wrote:

熨平满天期待的柔情
...

一块儿呆呆吧！
_________________
可情可理，去捧就真

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-05-06 17:52:32 Post subject: 那个力量呢，还是要靠食物供给比较实际。

悠子 wrote:

谢谢各位好友。
...

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可情可理，去捧就真

呆哥的女人
童生

Joined: 02 Mar 2008
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呆哥的女人Collection

Posted: 2008-05-09 02:00:20 Post subject:

嗯,悠子好一点没? 诗盗怎么不看场子了,一切都好? 上来给大家问个好. _________________ 人称呆嫂

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-05-10 03:31:58 Post subject: 因为：突然发现女人比男人优秀。

呆哥的女人 wrote:

嗯,悠子好一点没?

诗盗怎么不看场子了,一切都好?

上来给大家问个好.

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可情可理，去捧就真

呆哥的女人
童生

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Posts: 20

呆哥的女人Collection

Posted: 2008-05-12 16:33:50 Post subject: 诗盗宅心仁厚.

诗盗宅心仁厚. _________________ 人称呆嫂

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