墨染红颜
童生
Joined: 08 Oct 2006
Posts: 69
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 Posted: 2006-11-05 04:17:35 Post subject: 映月弯刀 |
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拉开窗棂，雨的残声还在桅栏上细语
极目望去，镰幕，凝铸成一片软缎挂在天边
星星伸出小手悄悄捻着墨
灯昏然，紧闭的宫门，锁断了嫦娥的泪
在云蔓后，涟涟
弓韧印满吴刚的悲愁，那一樽烈酒
如何浇灭这几世纪的情仇
借一弯月影，
读自己的小诗
忽然不知道怎样磨平这烧红的厉刃
在心口割破的痕迹
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和平岛
举人
Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
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| Posted: 2006-11-05 09:04:22 Post subject: |
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借一弯月影
巧借了 
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维鹿延
秀才
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 212
Location: 中国广东
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| Posted: 2006-11-07 09:01:16 Post subject: |
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心有所感啊。
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孙慧峰
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Joined: 09 Oct 2006
Posts: 97
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| Posted: 2006-11-15 03:13:41 Post subject: |
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| 有宋词之味~婉约细腻.。 |
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