俞伟远
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 Posted: 2008-01-24 20:16:30 Post subject: 一生的注释(中英对照---自译求教) |
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童年
一种美丽
春光里的芽
不用任何修饰
Childhood
A bud in the sunshine of spring
A kind of beauty
A word that is unnecessary to be modified
少年
充满疑惑和梦幻的等待
远离疲倦
一只翩飞的蝶一根树荫下的钓竿
Teenager
Dreaming always
Being filled with doubts
Keeping off weariness
Like a bee hunting for honey
Or a fishing pole in the shade
中年
看水听风审云
思考何时收线
有鱼上钩之后何去何从
Studying the water
Listening to the wind
Watching the clouds
Considering when and how to raise the fishing rod
As a fish is taking the bait there
老年
如何吹灭一盏灯
用最优雅的姿态
How to blow out a light
With a pose that is the most elegant
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William Zhou周道模
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| Posted: 2008-01-27 03:03:37 Post subject: |
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问好，学习。
翻得灵动，有非马先生那样的风格。
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戴玨
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| Posted: 2008-01-27 14:51:57 Post subject: |
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第一首可以變動一下句子的次序，如這樣便會顯得流暢點：
Childhood
A bud in the sunshine of spring
A kind of beauty
That needs no polish
最後那首應是blow out a light
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俞伟远
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| Posted: 2008-05-07 15:54:16 Post subject: |
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非常感谢两位朋友的指教和帮助.问好
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