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《想念一个人》
刘星源
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Joined: 05 Apr 2008
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Location: 山东
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PostPosted: 2008-04-25 02:14:20    Post subject: 《想念一个人》 Reply with quote

《想念一个人》

九月,在乡下
看云飘过头顶
突然想到一个人的名字
无法自拔

从夜深人静想到
夜深人静
从记忆深处想到
记忆深处

想到骨髓在骨头里哭泣
想到寂寞在血管里无法转身
想到故事之前
想到岁月以外

风开始慢下来
人开始慢下来
时间开始慢下来
心也开始慢下来……

九月,在家乡
我只是不经意地想到一个名字
那时,一朵云正飘过我的头顶
一如一些人与一些事走出我的记忆

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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-04-25 21:39:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

九月,在家乡
我只是不经意地想到一个名字
那时,一朵云正飘过我的头顶
一如一些人与一些事走出我的记忆....平缓.不错.
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-04-26 02:40:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

借别人的一句评:努力向内挖掘的诗歌
让我想起另一首:轻轻写一个人的名字,有异曲同工之妙,提上来欣赏!
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刘星源
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PostPosted: 2008-04-26 04:58:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢两位的赞赏
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