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禅机

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Posted: 2007-12-04 17:47:51 Post subject: 禅机

一今天会不会下雪这个问题像一场赌注于是风从白天等到黑夜和一口深井井台上堆满枯草谁说过今天要下雪井台枯草井底淌过水风从井口钻进去钻出来这口井没有井盖嘴织成天堂却让灵魂找不到归宿人间恐慌二风高一声低一声喊了一夜昨天有没有下雪它明知故问黎明苏醒马群奔腾过井口谎言又一次掩盖穹苍如无法触及的火

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-04 19:43:05 Post subject:

如禅

子花
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Posted: 2007-12-04 20:47:19 Post subject:

取题目还真有手！！

博弈
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Posted: 2007-12-04 21:23:35 Post subject:

挺好！感觉你有禅的自然，还没读到你太多的诗，所以只能说‘感觉‘。或许是散文的影响吧？ _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

Lake
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Posted: 2007-12-05 09:16:19 Post subject:

Very Zen. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2007-12-05 18:56:23 Post subject:

那大家说到底下雪了没有啊 _________________ 我是个平凡的人，但我喜欢在平凡的日子里做不平凡的事情，每个人都可以这么来作去认为自己的存在。

kokho
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Posted: 2007-12-07 19:13:28 Post subject:

。一言　看了　ｎｏｂｏｄｙ　的风花雪月。。应该很有感想吧？禅诗怎么写，现在会更有体会了哟　：）。。　祝你快乐　！。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

nobody
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Posted: 2007-12-07 19:21:59 Post subject:

kohko乱讲。很喜欢一言的这个，很简练含蓄且有的咀嚼。至于“到底下雪了没有“，我们这里下了 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-04-25 17:53:22 Post subject:

我不知道这能重新出现，不好意思 _________________ 我是个平凡的人，但我喜欢在平凡的日子里做不平凡的事情，每个人都可以这么来作去认为自己的存在。

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