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《她的梦》
刘星源
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PostPosted: 2008-04-21 23:46:46    Post subject: 《她的梦》 Reply with quote

《她的梦》刘星源[笔名]

他在归来的路上
日夜兼程
马蹄过处
莺飞草长......

哀怨在逃亡
烦恼在逃亡
失落在逃亡
伤心在逃亡

喜悦在绽放
快乐在绽放
幸福在绽放
美丽在绽放

呵,月亮在绽放
在她脸上 在她心上
呵,笑容在绽放
在她脸上 在她心上

山东省济宁市金宇路3号济宁职业技术学院经管系物流2班 刘星元 邮编272000
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PostPosted: 2008-04-24 01:04:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

对仗,结构和内容~
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