荆山云 童生
Joined: 27 Feb 2008 Posts: 22
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Posted: 2008-04-16 00:30:07 Post subject: 渔父词 春(乱凑) |
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无数桃花间杏花,
一棹清波醉流霞。
黄莺啭,
紫燕斜,
竹影松风三两家。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-16 10:16:39 Post subject: |
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一棹清波醉流霞
情致幽远.欣赏. _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-04-16 16:56:05 Post subject: |
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了了数语,春景跃然。词句朗朗。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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荆山云 童生
Joined: 27 Feb 2008 Posts: 22
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Posted: 2008-04-16 23:52:55 Post subject: |
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黄洋界 wrote: |
一棹清波醉流霞
情致幽远.欣赏. |
谢谢评阅。 |
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荆山云 童生
Joined: 27 Feb 2008 Posts: 22
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Posted: 2008-04-16 23:54:47 Post subject: |
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是有缘 wrote: |
了了数语,春景跃然。词句朗朗。 |
谢谢评阅。欢迎指点。 |
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叶英儿 秀才
Joined: 03 Jun 2006 Posts: 577 Location: 中国 叶英儿Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-17 01:38:49 Post subject: 不错. |
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不错. |
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荆山云 童生
Joined: 27 Feb 2008 Posts: 22
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Posted: 2008-04-17 05:11:20 Post subject: |
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谢谢朋友朋友。 |
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荆山云 童生
Joined: 27 Feb 2008 Posts: 22
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Posted: 2008-04-23 17:04:22 Post subject: |
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我是来学习的。还望大家多多指点。 |
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