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美丽的彩色蜻蜓

钓月
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Posted: 2008-04-18 16:14:59 Post subject: 美丽的彩色蜻蜓

美丽的火烧云中　　飘过一个小小身影　　追过仄仄的田埂　　跑过蜿蜒的泥径　　绕过黄灿灿菜畦　　钻过稀疏的树林　　跃过潺潺小溪　　想逮那彩色蜻蜓　　　　一片羽是秋色　　一片羽是冬雪　　一片羽是春雨　　一片羽是夏星　　美丽的精灵啊　　款款轻轻盈盈　　携四季的问候　　游弋在这片瞑瞑　　　　狗都不啃年龄　　我面目狰狞　　纯粹的冷血动物　　杀戮过无数生命　　是诗意的诱惑　　还是良心的觉醒　　那天只想捉住她　　陪伴我孤寂心灵　　　　我俘获一位仙姝　　系于老屋的窗棂　　有了一个玩伴　　我的心朝夕酩酊　　一根细细的线　　系牢我与她　　一头系着悲惨　　一头系着高兴　　　　当我被岁月的风　　刮过轮回的山岭　　扔进城市的囹圄　　我得了前世报应　　我的复眼被切除　　成了瞎子蜻蜓　　摆着永恒的飞翔姿势　　却挣不脱那根羁缨　　08-3-18于淮安钓月小筑 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

白水
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Posted: 2008-04-18 19:15:11 Post subject:

一头系着悲惨一头系着高兴　　读后是这种感觉

曲元奇
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Posted: 2008-04-18 20:29:15 Post subject:

最后一段的感悟使前面的诗更诱惑

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Posted: 2008-04-18 21:50:14 Post subject:

[quote="白水 Moonlight"]一头系着悲惨一头系着高兴　　读后是这种感觉 [/quote] 谢谢你的鼓励! _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

钓月
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Posted: 2008-04-18 21:51:36 Post subject:

[quote="曲元奇"]最后一段的感悟使前面的诗更诱惑[/quote] 谢谢曲元奇老师的光临鼓励 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-04-19 01:17:13 Post subject:

当我被岁月的风　　刮过轮回的山岭　　扔进城市的囹圄　　我得了前世报应　　我的复眼被切除　　成了瞎子蜻蜓　　摆着永恒的飞翔姿势　　却挣不脱那根羁缨后面使主题升华～

钓月
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Posted: 2008-04-19 07:20:17 Post subject:

谢谢你的鼓励! _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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