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五律
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PostPosted: 2008-04-20 13:09:49    Post subject: 五律 Reply with quote
五律 村中老父

墟里夕阳浅 柴门半掩扉
伛躯身渐短 病腿步难威
皲手摘垂果 衰肩负落晖
林间来宿鸟 翘首望儿归
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PostPosted: 2008-04-20 15:35:59    Post subject: Reply with quote
描写细腻切题！
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2008-04-21 06:41:33    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢有缘兄点评。
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PostPosted: 2008-04-21 15:16:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
喜结尾二联之情深。
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PostPosted: 2008-04-21 18:49:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄老善五律，细微处传神。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2008-04-22 09:22:52    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢莹雪庆宏评阅.
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PostPosted: 2008-04-22 19:14:38    Post subject: 一幅感人的国画 Reply with quote
五律 村中老父

墟里夕阳浅 柴门半掩扉
伛躯身渐短 病腿步难威
皲手摘垂果 衰肩负落晖
林间来宿鸟 翘首望儿归


黄老师大作画出了一幅感人的国画，可见功力深厚。
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PostPosted: 2008-04-23 04:31:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢秋叶鼓励.这首拙作实际上是从记忆中搜索出来的.
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