莞君 秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Posts: 561 Location: 中国 陕西 莞君Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-03 17:24:22 Post subject: 旧作就把它删掉 |
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感谢斑竹们 _________________ 莞君 |
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沙漠 秀才
Joined: 26 Jan 2007 Posts: 977 Location: 中国温州 沙漠Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-03 18:02:13 Post subject: |
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挺喜欢第二首的笔调! _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180 |
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鲁齐 秀才
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 101 Location: 中国山东 鲁齐Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-05 18:23:14 Post subject: |
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提读.
欣赏的作品! _________________ 诗歌是一面旗帜! |
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杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
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莞君 秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Posts: 561 Location: 中国 陕西 莞君Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-06 10:48:35 Post subject: |
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感谢你 多批 问好 _________________ 莞君 |
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韩少君 进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007 Posts: 2558 Location: 吉林四平 韩少君Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-10 00:55:53 Post subject: |
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这年头 土地是靠不住了
现实的关怀!
很好的一组.很欣赏.再精练一下会更好!
感觉有发展前途-=---- _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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莞君 秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Posts: 561 Location: 中国 陕西 莞君Collection |
Posted: 2007-11-10 07:54:04 Post subject: |
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哈哈 感谢先生的鼓励 问好 久仰大名 远握 _________________ 莞君 |
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钓月 秀才
Joined: 12 Apr 2008 Posts: 409 Location: 中国江苏 钓月Collection |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-17 19:09:16 Post subject: |
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为啥看不到帖子了? |
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