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开一个不落的花季

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Posted: 2008-04-10 06:51:44 Post subject: 开一个不落的花季

朦胧的尘堆砌着记忆的轮廓情绪被风吹雨打不经意的重复着日升月落吹童年的笛。寻找花蝶纷飞恍惚的瞬间不想让春的绚丽随秋的叶脉疲倦那一把锁关不住炊烟和初恋风从远方撩起的发丝荡着初衷未改的秋千存一方净土滴一点清恬开一个不落的花季只为我纯真的眼睛和你拈花的笑容 04/10/2008

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Posted: 2008-04-10 08:13:12 Post subject:

真棒！第二段尤喜。一定是昨晚上玩出来的灵感。悠子你的诗情啊，借我一点吧。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-04-10 08:26:44 Post subject: 我们接着玩啊

苏茉儿 wrote:

真棒！第二段尤喜。一定是昨晚上玩出来的灵感。悠子你的诗情啊，借我一点吧。

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Posted: 2008-04-10 08:47:13 Post subject: 想象一下诗盗他老人家骑在牛背上炊笛，草青花香

苏茉儿 wrote:

真棒！第二段尤喜。一定是昨晚上玩出来的灵感。悠子你的诗情啊，借我一点吧。

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Posted: 2008-04-10 12:14:14 Post subject:

悠子不好意思，竟瞎玩那个(如梦令)去了。唉~~~突然没了诗思，我去想想。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-04-10 14:20:51 Post subject:

第二段茉儿借去，其他的俺包啦！一口价～ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-10 14:55:29 Post subject: 牛排的钱赚来了？

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第二段茉儿借去，其他的俺包啦！一口价～

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Posted: 2008-04-10 15:36:12 Post subject: 赚牛排的钱赚来了！

悠子 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

第二段茉儿借去，其他的俺包啦！一口价～

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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-10 15:45:41 Post subject:

朦胧的尘也许是尘封的往事也许是昨天的情思也许是寂寞的幽思也许是流失的记忆

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Posted: 2008-04-10 19:26:16 Post subject: 来了！来了～

_________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-10 20:24:07 Post subject:

很喜欢。读，读你的感觉象三月。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-04-11 08:35:22 Post subject: 四月也不错

是有缘 wrote:

很喜欢。读，读你的感觉象三月。

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Posted: 2008-04-11 08:36:24 Post subject: 够买几份啦

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

悠子 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

第二段茉儿借去，其他的俺包啦！一口价～

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Posted: 2008-04-11 13:13:47 Post subject:

悠子我写不出。写不出。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-04-11 13:14:44 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

haha...........
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Posted: 2008-04-12 10:51:25 Post subject:

一月 wrote:

朦胧的尘
也许是尘封的往事
也许是昨天的情思
也许是寂寞的幽思
也许是流失的记忆

往事尘封
幽思寂寞
昨天流失在情思的尘
朦胧记忆

呵呵，乱改

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Posted: 2008-04-12 17:40:10 Post subject: 继续乱改！

悠子 wrote:

一月 wrote:

朦胧的尘
也许是尘封的往事
也许是昨天的情思
也许是寂寞的幽思
也许是流失的记忆

往事尘封
幽思寂寞
...

昨天的情丝
尘封的往事
流失的记忆
寂寞的幽思
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可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-12 17:45:49 Post subject: 这有误会！

悠子 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

悠子 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

第二段茉儿借去，其他的俺包啦！一口价～

我的意思是赚到了买牛排的第一桶金，也就是说还不能吃牛排，只能靠这桶金去赚买牛排的钱。
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Posted: 2008-04-12 17:48:39 Post subject: 那牛排没你的份喔～

_________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-13 19:45:02 Post subject:

不错，错不了。

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