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赶场天（新韵律参差八行组诗）

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Posted: 2008-04-01 07:13:07 Post subject: 赶场天（新韵律参差八行组诗）

赶场天（新韵律参差八行组诗）文/ 山城子 ▲ 菜市场今儿个太阳又藏起来了小北风小倒一回春寒草儿树们依然兴奋自己叫卖声还是标识一个赶场天农民没什么蔬菜交换了开花的菜杆要价半元自称土蛋的往往饲料伺候鲜猪肉十二不再十三 ▲ 水果摊二道贩子的一统地盘一年四季总有颜状变化展览橙子黄黄芒果也黄如外籍女梨子苹果香蕉摊摊窈窕腼腆我总是替他们发愁咋一年一年的卖也卖不完岂不知买地都修了小小别墅也不知凝结的都是谁的血汗 ▲ 大篷车不是吉普寨人那样的浪漫他们把省城装载到了乡间青睐桂圆的小镇女职知道小区门前每周的地点饼干蛋糕果冻果脯果仁虾皮酱菜腐乳老干妈摆成阵线买方市场东风压倒西风卖方市场乖乖躲进历史修炼 ▲ 小篷车钻进小区转悠不是踩点高音喇叭声浪往复回环产地一般都标榜上海温州张扬半个月还是最后三天上衣内裤乳罩床上用品租用倒闭的国企饭店血本大甩卖总是甩得不痛快背井离乡的算盘如何盘点 ▲ 跳蚤市一个单调的声音盘旋单调一份一元不多不少一份一元不多不少一份一元不多不少你听得很累半导体它不累一份份马路牙子上绵延包抄玻璃杯牙刷指甲刀抠耳勺纽扣小拉锁针头线脑…… 2008-3-30于文化村（561104 贵州省平坝县红湖学校李德贵） _________________

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Posted: 2008-04-01 07:48:15 Post subject:

赶会也可以是诗～欣赏问好山城子老师！

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Posted: 2008-04-01 08:37:30 Post subject:

老师对生活的观察很细腻

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Posted: 2008-04-01 17:13:34 Post subject:

充满生活的细致情趣。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-04-14 00:55:02 Post subject:

此中有真谛 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2008-04-15 07:03:41 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

赶会也可以是诗～欣赏问好山城子老师！

北方叫赶集，南方叫赶场，你们叫赶会！好玩！

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Posted: 2008-04-15 07:05:27 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

老师对生活的观察很细腻

问好白水！

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Posted: 2008-04-15 07:08:41 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

充满生活的细致情趣。

问好nobody——朋友！

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Posted: 2008-04-15 07:10:29 Post subject:

钓月 wrote:

此中有真谛

欲辨已忘然。——问好！

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