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PostPosted: 2008-04-18 19:14:53    Post subject: 画外音(组诗) Reply with quote

画外音(组诗)

◎行天

星星语

对话朗朗夜空
寄情诗歌的穿越
从旋转星系到一抹星云
放纵心空的旅行
风吹性感语汇
坦坦荡荡面对水世界
遥望赤诚的天体
众神之车初渡银河
留下美惠三女神期盼的眼神
海水曾经横泛沙岸已经退远
许多故都覆手顿成废墟
明天有片云来访
窗外展开亮蓝书页



花瓣语

风景里柔性的吸引饰以标准笑容
一幅省略了花边的美丽镜像
开窗向南 没有建筑的广阔原野 放映
两地相思 嫩红得心颤的恋情
起风的日子 有什么正在发生
尘封的犹豫向阳光投诚
行云漫步 镀亮晴空下的幸福
闪烁的水晶投影许多灿烂写真
诱惑海滨 又被昂贵的都市预定
曾经坚固的造型 塔尖沉没的背景
在花雨中悄悄远去 渐渐酩酊

波浪语

海面铺开粼粼思路 一切透明
你的犹豫你的失落都交付水上花
看周围幻变的惊异“今天”惊动眼神
狂情海岸醉舞花朵与城市倒影
当某些困惑徘徊记忆里沉默的山谷
时时新颖的潮汐又变更过往苔痕
青涩的爱旋转的情酷炫青春视频
被无边深蓝拥抱选择不再独自冠名
闲适的营帐 了望的礁石 鱼美人的造型
等待海的刷新 告别曾经的冷与疼
迟到的阳光如此珍贵
离了岸就接近远方风景
亲历四季挥别许多温馨港口重返不一样的海
心中灵动每一处波纹辉煌含盐的掌纹
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PostPosted: 2008-04-19 04:10:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

最喜欢<花瓣雨>
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PostPosted: 2008-04-19 16:05:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

花瓣语

风景里柔性的吸引饰以标准笑容
一幅省略了花边的美丽镜像
开窗向南 没有建筑的广阔原野 放映
两地相思 嫩红得心颤的恋情
起风的日子 有什么正在发生
尘封的犹豫向阳光投诚
行云漫步 镀亮晴空下的幸福
闪烁的水晶投影许多灿烂写真
诱惑海滨 又被昂贵的都市预定
曾经坚固的造型 塔尖沉没的背景
在花雨中悄悄远去 渐渐酩酊

意象 语言都不错 问好
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PostPosted: 2008-04-20 18:44:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好白水、莞君二位诗友,谢读!
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