田建勋
秀才
Joined: 29 Jan 2007
Posts: 109
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 Posted: 2008-04-09 06:42:27 Post subject: 七绝*感春（三首） |
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其一
绿扬如发绕轻烟，芳草萋萋染碧天。
笔下莫愁无写处，春光万里尽诗篇。
其二
处处春晖莫等闲，拾来皆可构佳篇。
休言诗小难成利，只为风光不为钱。
其三
青枝嫩蕊吐新红，各逞芳姿尽不同。
又是一年花讯至，莫教美酒误东风。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2008-04-09 17:11:51 Post subject: |
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三首结句均佳，而又各有情致。欣赏。
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2008-04-09 17:37:39 Post subject: |
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| 春色可人。 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2008-04-09 17:47:56 Post subject: |
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| 春意盎然。 |
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暗香如沁
秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
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田建勋
秀才
Joined: 29 Jan 2007
Posts: 109
田建勋Collection |
| Posted: 2008-04-10 14:23:25 Post subject: |
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| 一一感谢楼上老师们的玉评，问好。 |
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