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悠子
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Posted: 2008-04-05 15:27:00 Post subject: 想爱的季节

这是一个想爱的季节每一朵花绽开的声音就给那只小蝴蝶一次轻轻扑动的喜悦推开一帘细雨阳光突然从梦深处送来一叶七彩色简约的书笺梦外，竹深的小径掩着一路胭脂与粉红静谧的不知如何复述纷乱溅得遍地四处的温柔很想牵你的手，走走~~ 04/05/2008 和红袖<春天不是写诗天>，和不下去L

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Posted: 2008-04-05 15:40:35 Post subject:

第一段很很好看。。。。第二段~~ 阳光，嗯，太阳雨耶~~~ 第三段~~ 溅得遍地四处的温柔遍地就好。。四处重复了~~ 溅起？就完成了~~~ 我也“很想牵你的手，走走~~ ” _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-04-05 16:02:52 Post subject:

是阳光，不知咋滴变了。嗯，我说和不下去了，你还给我麻烦~

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Posted: 2008-04-05 17:13:59 Post subject:

好看 _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-04-05 17:43:30 Post subject:

这样就ok了我觉得，还继续啊，已经挺好的了。我都写不出呢。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-04-05 18:44:46 Post subject:

我也写不出。。。和改也没啥关系~~~ 这诗有改头。。很好看。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-04-06 01:04:19 Post subject:

洗洗手先！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-06 03:55:22 Post subject:

我手洗了，脸也洗了，就缺你们给我洗脑子~

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Posted: 2008-04-06 11:36:48 Post subject:

很想牵你的手，走走~~ 白水大SG来了

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Posted: 2008-04-06 14:49:01 Post subject: SJ/SM不能冒充哦~

白水 Moonlight wrote:

很想牵你的手，走走~~

白水大SG来了 let's dance

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Posted: 2008-04-06 15:14:35 Post subject:

牵上手，走走～～～～ _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-04-06 15:17:58 Post subject:

牵上手，走走～～～～ _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-04-06 16:42:22 Post subject:

走走......

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Posted: 2008-04-06 19:12:47 Post subject: 走走

点点儿 wrote:

牵上手，走走～～～～

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Posted: 2008-04-06 19:13:17 Post subject: 再走走

点点儿 wrote:

牵上手，走走～～～～

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Posted: 2008-04-06 19:15:19 Post subject: :) 和谁呀~

一月 wrote:

走走......

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Posted: 2008-04-06 19:16:05 Post subject:

走到9月9

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Posted: 2008-04-07 03:37:08 Post subject:

走走，花园在我的言语中诞生。

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Posted: 2008-04-07 03:43:56 Post subject:

随便走走，金钱在我双手中滋长。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-04-07 06:36:20 Post subject: 嘻，花言巧语~~

一月 wrote:

走走，花园在我的言语中诞生。

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