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菊花开时(外二首)
张瑞
童生


Joined: 27 Oct 2006
Posts: 5

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PostPosted: 2006-11-06 03:34:02    Post subject: 菊花开时(外二首) Reply with quote

1, <菊花开时>

我踩着陈旧的脚印归来
此时,羊群正在山腰寻找
那些红色野果
一些微露的绽放
还躲在温暖的毡房,暗自呼吸

云朵滴落的时光
风越走越低,我的眼睛里
秋水泛滥,似乎可以直接抵达
季节深处散落的故事

在掌心,在你的发梢
我翘首以待,这秋天之子
铺满你来时的路
众花退却

依稀呈现的远方
还未有半点波澜
荒芜的庄园,在此刻
我将那些枯黄的茅草收起
一半是遗落的美丽
一半是握住的记忆

2,时光的谜底

一朵花,在古老的石墙上
开放着
在我到来之前
栽花之人就已经远去

从那些深的,浅的印痕里
我看到一双双手抬起
然后滑落
走过的人,哀怨或笑语
都已深深地陷落进光阴的黑洞
如今,谁还踩在刻刀走后的
皱纹里

历史,像一个拂袖而去的书生
我还未将那些凌乱的书页捡起
他却已经老去

最初和最后的猜测
一朵花永不再凋零
时光的谜底
我轻轻触了一下
答案,又一次被丢掉

     3,练习
  
  窗子里,阳光在桌子上摊开
  和许多优美的词汇一样
  我把翅羽塞满整个房子
  在纸上练习飞翔
  从一种姿势
  到另一种姿势

  翻开的书页
  那些白色和灰色的鸽子
  一朵朵吹落在这个中午
  风的潮汐还未退尽
  此时,我将它们收起
  心的感觉
  和天空一样平衡
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和平岛
举人


Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
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PostPosted: 2006-11-06 15:17:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

一些很美好的感觉
被集结成诗

语言也很娴熟
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维鹿延
秀才


Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 212
Location: 中国广东
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PostPosted: 2006-11-07 02:06:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

用心感觉,以心为诗。
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