莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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 Posted: 2008-04-02 22:49:13 Post subject: 五绝—春日偶感 |
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暖雨身沉醉，寒衣梦已归。
红桃花吐艳，翠柳絮轻飞。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2008-04-03 18:07:46 Post subject: |
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传递出了春的信息。
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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游向高原的鱼
秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007
Posts: 382
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| Posted: 2008-04-03 19:48:35 Post subject: |
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和莹雪
连夜凄凄处，冬风假已归？
忽听柳呀语，春意款款飞。
下面是莹雪的原诗
暖雨身沉醉，寒衣梦已归。
红桃花吐艳，翠柳絮轻飞
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人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。 |
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莹雪
进士出身
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Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2008-04-03 21:58:24 Post subject: |
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谢谢黄老点评！ |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2008-04-03 21:58:53 Post subject: |
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和莹雪
连夜凄凄处，冬风假已归。
忽听柳呀语，春意款款飞 ... |
回和游向高原的鱼
昨夜身无处，今晨映柳归。
熟吟春闹语，生怕夏风飞。 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2008-04-04 14:09:59 Post subject: |
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| 好诗好和。欣赏！ |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2008-04-04 23:38:58 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢GG点评！ |
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