kino
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Joined: 23 Dec 2006
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Location: beijing
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 Posted: 2009-05-10 14:31:59 Post subject: 感伤的毒药 |
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感伤的毒药
曾浸透我的青春
亲自斩断的
菜花蛇
在体内衔草自接
当夜晚来袭，它的灵
行在风中
the poisonous sentiments
soaked my adolescent days
the snake i did cut
joined himself with herbs
when night raids in, his spirit
walks in the wind
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William Zhou周道模
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Location: 中国四川广汉
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| Posted: 2009-05-12 13:04:27 Post subject: |
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O, the sentiment is the snake.
Why are you so sentimental,Sir?
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Lake
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| Posted: 2009-05-15 18:25:37 Post subject: |
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Very sentimental, Kino. And it has a lingering feel. Not quite sure of "I did cut".
Cheers,
Lake
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