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别离

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Posted: 2008-06-12 17:31:13 Post subject: 别离

清澈的溪流一路叮咚欢快的小河就要分流今朝的别离是为了明天的再见今天的爱甜蜜如奔腾的江水滔滔不息明天的情蜜甜似平静的大海深沉无边临到分别的这一刻我哭了眼泪是心灵的露珠也是爱情的雨点 _________________ 天边云一朵苍海粟一粒云儿朵朵随风飘粟儿粒粒满山崖

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Posted: 2008-06-13 07:07:49 Post subject:

最后一段，收的漂亮！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-06-13 16:08:54 Post subject: 回复

苏茉儿 wrote:

最后一段，收的漂亮！

谢谢欣赏点评!问好朋友!
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Posted: 2008-06-13 21:18:13 Post subject:

最后一段收得漂亮----沿苏茉儿

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Posted: 2008-06-14 07:43:15 Post subject: 回复

曲元奇 wrote:

最后一段收得漂亮----沿苏茉儿

谢谢朋友欣赏点评!问好!
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Posted: 2008-06-14 10:39:57 Post subject:

欢迎来落尘！接着沿，沿二。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-06-16 07:11:25 Post subject:

谢谢朋友!老师请赐教哦! 问好! _________________ 天边云一朵苍海粟一粒云儿朵朵随风飘粟儿粒粒满山崖

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Posted: 2008-06-18 10:17:02 Post subject:

砍一刀！清澈的溪流一路叮咚欢快的小河就要分流今朝的别离明天的再见今天的爱，明天的情蜜甜、甜蜜临到分别的这一刻我哭了眼泪是心灵的露珠也是爱情的雨点 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-06-19 03:32:49 Post subject: 回复

[quote="詩盜喜裸評"]砍一刀！ ...[/quote] 漂亮!的确漂亮!真得好好谢谢老师哦!希望老师多多赐教哦! 问声好! _________________ 天边云一朵苍海粟一粒云儿朵朵随风飘粟儿粒粒满山崖

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Posted: 2008-06-19 10:00:10 Post subject: 瞧！美的，这是你的作品哪！

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砍一刀！
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漂亮!的确漂亮!真得好好谢谢老师哦!希望老师多多赐教哦!
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Posted: 2008-06-19 15:17:47 Post subject: 回复

[quote="詩盜喜裸評"][quote="wq0066"][quote="诗盗喜裸评"]砍一刀！ ...[/quote] 漂亮!的确漂亮!真得好好谢谢老师哦!希望老师多多赐教哦! ...[/quote][/quote] 不!应该是老师把格式调整了一下,这个美就显现出来了哦!功劳应归功于您! 谢谢!问好! _________________ 天边云一朵苍海粟一粒云儿朵朵随风飘粟儿粒粒满山崖

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