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古井
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Joined: 01 Jun 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-03-26 20:53:48    Post subject: <<★一声不吭>>外三个 Reply with quote

★一声不吭

落雪的下午,面对一群麻雀
我看到战战兢兢的秋叶
他们一声不吭
他们从土里爬出来
他们愤怒地坐上枝头
就像孩子病的枯黄的八月
聚在村长的院子里抽旱烟,一声不吭

★致故乡

故乡啊,我就是那倒流的河水
请宽恕我的冒昧
我不想翻卷、跃起、击打礁石
就让眼泪去寻找大海吧
今生我只用碎碎的脚步
量度你的肌肤
浅浅唱,深深爱

★海燕,我只爱你

海燕,我只爱你
爱你,我用月牙湖一湖的春天
打造一枚银针
刺穿我的腰肢

轻轻别在你丝绸上的彩蝶啊
不只是标本

★请求

春天,请拿去我
没有髓质的骨头
给我一个植物的身份
和小浆果站在一起
允许我讨厌铁和锈蚀的颜色
允许我柔软地生长
在大大的山梁
在大大的沟坡
小口小口地呼吸
用小小的枝叶
举起小小的脸
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-03-26 21:07:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

用小小的枝叶
举起小小的脸,
这首感觉很好~
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赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-03-27 00:23:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢<请求>,好状态.
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