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(原创)人生
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PostPosted: 2006-10-24 16:08:46    Post subject: (原创)人生 Reply with quote

人 生



田 斌



人生不能没有梦想

不能没有希望

不能没有回忆

有痛苦 也有甜蜜



人生不能没有海洋

不能不去扬帆

不能不去捕捞

有风浪 也有港湾



人生不能没有高山

不能不去攀登

不能不去斩棘

有汗水 也有浓荫



人生不能没有草原

不能不去驰骋

不能不去放牧

有虎豹 也有牛羊



人生不能没有田野

不能不去耕耘

不能不去收获

有艰辛 也有喜悦



人生不能没有荒漠

不能不去探寻

不能不去开垦

有沙漠 也有盛景



人生不能没有街市

不能不去徜徉

不能不去选择

有失意 也有笑脸



人生不能没有爱情

不能不去体会

不能不去珍惜

有离别 也有欢聚



人生啊 人生

酸甜苦辣咸

你我都要

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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2006-10-25 15:46:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

太直白,形象性不足。
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2006-10-29 18:46:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

人生不能没有高山 ......................深度和意境上挖掘一下.
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维鹿延
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PostPosted: 2006-10-30 03:53:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好
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PostPosted: 2006-11-03 03:34:38    Post subject: 呵呵,是的 Reply with quote

比较白了!
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