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道别

白水
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Posted: 2006-10-22 10:19:21 Post subject: 道别

道别 <握手> 在分别的时候脉搏传递着心的战栗道一声珍重第一次也是最后一次握手 <神经> 承受太多的刺激已麻木了或者谓之坚韧 <泪水> 泊泊地流就是一潭秋水也干涸了清澈的泉眼捧出浑浊的底色 <寒冰> 凝固吧封存生命之源耗尽了才想起珍惜

和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
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Posted: 2006-10-22 11:18:02 Post subject:

小巧 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Posted: 2006-10-23 05:57:10 Post subject:

有味道的一组，欣赏。

左岸
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Joined: 12 Oct 2006
Posts: 215
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Posted: 2006-10-23 20:47:08 Post subject:

凝固吧封存生命之源耗尽了才想起珍惜诗短含义深，引入思考。 _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

维鹿延
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 212
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Posted: 2006-10-24 09:19:24 Post subject:

思考生活，因之有诗。 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

白水
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Posted: 2006-10-24 13:59:57 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

小巧

比起你的<轮渡>是绝对不同的重量级 Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2006-10-24 14:00:46 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

有味道的一组，欣赏。

谢谢鼓励.

白水
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Posted: 2006-10-24 14:02:20 Post subject:

左岸 wrote:

凝固吧
封存生命之源
耗尽了
才想起珍惜
诗短含义深，引入思考。

谢谢你的同感.人往往是这样, 失去时才认识其价值. 悔之却已晚矣......

白水
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Posted: 2006-10-24 14:08:13 Post subject:

维鹿延 wrote:

思考生活，因之有诗。

谢谢. 的确, 诗歌来源于生活, 升华于生活. 如果生活是浑浊的黄河, 诗歌就是壶口的紫烟

一无
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Joined: 20 Mar 2013
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Posted: 2013-07-06 09:37:43 Post subject:

“在分别的时候脉搏传递着心的战栗道一声珍重第一次也是最后一次握手 ” 在第392页找到，欣赏。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

白水
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Posted: 2013-07-06 11:00:56 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

“在分别的时候
脉搏传递着
心的战栗
道一声珍重
第一次
也是最后一次
握手 ”

在第392页找到，欣赏。
...

谢谢朋友顶出旧作，让我想起这空前绝后的一握 Very Happy

山城子
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Posted: 2013-07-06 15:42:46 Post subject:

耗尽了才想起珍惜 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

一无
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Joined: 20 Mar 2013
Posts: 576
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Posted: 2013-07-07 14:33:26 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

一无 wrote:

“在分别的时候
脉搏传递着
心的战栗
道一声珍重
第一次
也是最后一次
握手 ”

在第392页找到，欣赏。
...

谢谢朋友顶出旧作，让我想起这空前绝后的一握 Very Happy

或许是刻骨铭心的体验，才得以平凡无奇的字词动容读者。有机会欣赏好诗，是享受。谢谢！
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2013-07-09 11:36:17 Post subject:

看了感觉很沉重，细看才知是旧作…… _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

远狼
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Posted: 2013-07-11 08:07:34 Post subject:

欣赏白水君旧作。问好，夏安！ _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

淇兰舒
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Joined: 18 Jul 2013
Posts: 15

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Posted: 2013-07-18 11:22:11 Post subject:

欣赏，好

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